Orbalistic tendencies, rainbowgasm dreams
planetary circumstance, vibrancy extremes.
Bubbletastic metaphors, ethereal profusion
peacock feathered tresses, swaying in confusion.
Galleonicious butterflies, purpleised expressions
Pegasus revisited, leaving winged confessions.
Surrealistic fantamscapes, bottled innuendos
colourtacious orchestras, playing soft crescendos.
Author notes
Credit - Painting by Boris Vallejo.
A contest entry
- What is your first thought when you see this picture? by Nardiarrrg.
550 points, ended December 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Pretty cool... the rhyme is pretty well done in this poem...
Thanks for entering and good luck... =]] -
as groovy as the pic itself. Right on! Write on!
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the rhyme scheme is great here, and i am absolutely in love with the word 'rainbowgasm', that part made me laugh but definitely describes the picture. its a great poem to go along with this surreal picture, all of the made up words go really well with the theme. great job!
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Wow you are on a roll
This is just amaziong! How do you do rhyme so well Ubusuqal and stunning word choices here!
Best Wishes in the contest
Gaylene
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