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Don't Leave 12-23-08

Taunt me, Tease me
Just please don't leave me
Hold me, Hug me
Just don't hurt me
Love me, Trust me
Just be mine
Kiss me, Miss me
Let me be who I am
Don't suffocate or cling
Say what you mean
No lies, No goodbyes
Just you and I
Taunt me, Tease me
Just please don't leave me.

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  • HaleyMary
    December 25, 2008

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    Beautiful write, great rhyming flow and powerful emotion expressed. I liked how you began and ended this piece the same way. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.

    Haley Mary