lying in wait
beneath white cover
crocuses
Author notes
Lee Tai Wah
A contest entry
- Haiku by Kathraina.
900 points, ended January 5, 42 entries
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Honorable mention
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...a grand day when the white sheets ar lifted and their bright eyes open!
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Hi Dogfish
In China, Japan and other countries, the white sheets have been lifted to reveal the colourful crocuses. -
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Be happy ! we have 4 feet of snow in Quebec , and tonight sleet is falling!
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lying in wait
i like this
my thoughts
dorment sleep
beneath white cover
crocuses
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Hi Malabu
Thank you for the HM.
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perfect
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Hi Drag aine
Thank you. -
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you are most welcom
I dream now of the crocus under snow -
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Hi Drag aine
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Lovely! The image of life, waiting its proper time...
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Hi JUst Mercedes
Thank you.
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wonderfully done. great job
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Hi Kathraina
Thank you.
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A perfect image to place in the mind
of those of us snowbound, again and again.
Oh, a tip of green emerging!
Naw---just in my imagination
with your prompting!!
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Hi Aesthete
It's good to imagine. It is all green and rainy here so i have to imagine the snow and the crocuses - they are beautiful.
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