Bubbles blown by the wind of hope,
Light shines the way,
colors appear.
Choose your life, the colors that dazzle
in transparent little spheres
reflecting in rainbows
and light brightening prisms and arcs.
Droplets fly
through the waves that wash past.
Hurricanes blow around.
White waters, raging rapids,
sand washes away,
to be swept in the arms of it's carefree lover.
A small heart in the shadows
quakes in the wind.
Light never shines upon it,
bubbles run away
but colors never fade.
Author notes
Uhm This isn't my best work, and the picture's just....I feel like I could have typed up something more inspirational, but...it's kinda vague.
Picture: http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2431/295.jpg?1230181885
A contest entry
- What is your first thought when you see this picture? by Nardiarrrg.
550 points, ended December 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Is it thought-provoking, or just not that good?
Comments
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I love it
You paint such a wonderful picture with your words I must give you a Bravo on this one indeed.
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It's very good....
It sort of changes style alf way through from being a very sweet poem to quite a powerfull one... I loved it..
Thanks for entering and good luck =]] -
Nice!
I liked it. My favorite part (lines 4 and 5 of stanza 4) is a good closing. You were very metaphorical, and it went well with the picture.
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Its really good light as the air!
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Thank you!
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