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missing you

roll out the map
and look forward
i can see that your not there

put my life in reverse
back up into history
and redo what i did

scratch the paint off the car
to revile the truth
that i still love you

i miss you love
were so far apart now
but so close

you've moved on
and i cant find the strength
to do that same thing

i just want the us we used to have
and laying in the grass at Webster
walking hand in hand to lunch

id give the world for you
do anything for you
and to be with you

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  • Very sad,..Sorry you feel so heartbroken. But don't imprison yourself, dark halls never last long, if we don't continue to feed our nightmares, with our fears. Just dream. But great write, very good, and thanks for the comment on my poem.

    Sincerely,
    Deathwolf Tasagka

  • hippytreehuger
    December 31, 2008
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    awww this is so cute sis!! i love it it makes me want to cry!!!