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So I Run Away

I don't want you to feel my pain
What I have to hide
My life is tainted and stained
I am afraid to feel inside
The lord knows I want to be with you
Lay forever in your arms
I am just scared of what I will put you through
Would I give you happiness or will I do you more harm
So I run away

Why do you waist your time on me
You deserve so much better than this
Why don't you let me be
Do you just chase the unreachable kiss
How can you love what is not there
Why do you keep wiping away my tears
You are making me feel? Its not fair
You are making me face my fears
So I run Away

I wish I could be your angel
The light that fills your eyes
I wish my life wasn't so intangled
And I didn't have to hurt you with my lies
And I wish to god I was that person
You want me so much to be
But one thing in this world I know for certain
That person isn't me
So I run away





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  • ChunkyC
    June 17

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    This makes me feel like the person I'm in love with wrote some of this. I relate well. I like it.

    I love the first stanza, I feel like it's all the things I wish he felt, the things I wish he would say. It's rather heart-wrenching. Good job.

    -Do you just chase the unreachable kiss
    How can you love what is not there

    Story of my life. This is how I live everyday. Chasing an unreachable thing. Loving something that will never be. Story. Of. My. Life. Wonderful job!

    Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest :]


  • Heva Feva
    June 6
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    Great job. Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
    -heva


  • BluesMan gold member
    February 22
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    If some one truly loves you they'll take the bad with the good and gently invite you to grow. Very heart felt Thaank you for entering my contest


  • Redsoldier245
    January 7

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    veyr touching. I think that alot of people will be able to relate to this. Poems that touch people are the ones that are going to succeed in this world.
    Hope fullly this one will.
    Good Luck


  • Kathrin silver member
    January 7

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    amazing

    I can relate to this so very much but not from your point of view from the person you write for, its very very sad that people cant just be themselves and be loved for it, but you are so not alone and your honesty and touching words you write here, tell me you care deeply for this person, let them be there and see were it takes you thats all i can say, good luck and take car kathrin xx


  • Trapped Destruction
    January 3
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    I LOVE this! good job!!

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