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My Beautiful Friend

She hides in the shadows
Watching, waiting
Forever patient
My beautiful friend.

She brings the rain
Freezing, blinding
Forever cold
My beautiful friend.

Inside she's hollow
Gasping, choking
Lost for words
My beautiful friend.

Inside she's poisoned
Breaking, bleeding
Lost for words
My beautiful friend.

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Agh.. Again with the not writing much lately. How I've missed it...

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  • Endeavor gold member
    January 11

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    Good


    She brings the rain
    Freezing, blinding
    Forever cold
    My beautiful friend.

    I feel you emotion in this
    Sorry if your distress is real

    Rick