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Brevette

love
creates
relationship

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  • chasingtheday gold member
    March 20

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    aye and this piece could be read the other way round too where relationship creates love, either way it works just fine a good poem. for 3 lines it got a lengthy comment from me, longer than my quickfire comment


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    January 1
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    Very clever poem.

    Mike

  • aqua -rius
    December 31, 2008
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    A Rivetting Experience

    Certainly
    it lasts for a brief while ,
    but a lasing rivetting
    experience with you.


  • Summer52
    December 28, 2008

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    Just the word LOVE can create so many meanings.

    Congrats on this one for the silver trophy.

    Greetings this Holiday Season.


    summer51

  • Just4u
    December 25, 2008

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    As opposed to relationships create love...

    Where there is love there is always a bond
    Where there is a bond may not always be love

    Hugs and Happy Holidays
    Eddy


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 25, 2008

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    Wonderful! Such truth in those 3 simple words. Excellent piece.
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene

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