Life's River:
You'll never be mine.
Restoring lost hope...
Harsh reality sets in.
Life's Song:
Broken, Incomplete, Empty.
Come back,
Perpetual benevolence.
My dreams crushed in the fury of my mind.
Author notes
I realize this is...odd...
It's for a contest with the following guidelines:
1- Take the first line of your newest poem written (Your first line)
2- Take the title of the very first poem you ever posted (Your second line)
3- Take the last line of your third newest poem (your third line)
4- Take the 3rd line from your favorite poem you have written (Your forth line)
5- Take the 5th line from a poem you have entered into a contest (Your fifth line)
6- Take the second line from a poem you dislike the most (Your sixth line)
7- Take the title of a poem you have won a medal on (Your seventh line)
8- Take the second to last line from your 5th most recent poem (Your eighth line)
9- Take your favorite line from your favorite poem (Your ninth line)
10- Make up your last line in this poem (Your tenth line)
Oddly enough...it does make sense in a weird sort of way 
A contest entry
- 10 Step Masterpeice ~*~ by Brooklynn Tainted.
625 points, ended January 4, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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cool!
its hard to explain but this sounds like your poetry but different, as if it was spoken by all different voices, which makes sense i guess considering the contest
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cool
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Nice i like this alot.. its cool how it comes together... thanks for entering and good luck


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sweet. This poem is actually remarkably good. I'm totally entering the contest though, it sounds like fun. Thanks for explaining it in the authors notes. I was like, for the first line, huh? b/c that was the line from the poem you just posted, so i was confuddled. But anyway tis uh-mazing i like this poem.






