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Crushed Dreams

Unsure how to stand.

Life's River:
You'll never be mine.

Restoring lost hope...
  Harsh reality sets in.

Life's Song:
Broken, Incomplete, Empty.

Come back,
Perpetual benevolence.

My dreams crushed in the fury of my mind.

Author notes

I realize this is...odd...
It's for a contest with the following guidelines:

1- Take the first line of your newest poem written (Your first line)
2- Take the title of the very first poem you ever posted (Your second line)
3- Take the last line of your third newest poem (your third line)
4- Take the 3rd line from your favorite poem you have written (Your forth line)
5- Take the 5th line from a poem you have entered into a contest (Your fifth line)
6- Take the second line from a poem you dislike the most (Your sixth line)
7- Take the title of a poem you have won a medal on (Your seventh line)
8- Take the second to last line from your 5th most recent poem (Your eighth line)
9- Take your favorite line from your favorite poem (Your ninth line)
10- Make up your last line in this poem (Your tenth line)

Oddly enough...it does make sense in a weird sort of way

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  • Wydra
    January 1

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    cool!

    its hard to explain but this sounds like your poetry but different, as if it was spoken by all different voices, which makes sense i guess considering the contest




  • Wydra
    January 1
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    cool


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    Nice i like this alot.. its cool how it comes together... thanks for entering and good luck


  • StarIlluminated
    December 26, 2008

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    sweet. This poem is actually remarkably good. I'm totally entering the contest though, it sounds like fun. Thanks for explaining it in the authors notes. I was like, for the first line, huh? b/c that was the line from the poem you just posted, so i was confuddled. But anyway tis uh-mazing i like this poem.