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h i s s i n g
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Author notes
brevette;
Line one is a noun (subject),
line two a verb (action),spaced - on-going action
line three a noun (object).
A contest entry
- The Brevette Contest 3 by Billbard.
1000 points, ended December 28, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ohhhhhhhh, dynamic but disturbing.
Tempting, no? 
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YES!....MERRY CHRISTMAS POET... hug**
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wow those hissing lips must be angry or very sensual lol good luck in his contest ,very well visualized...
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Interesting! I'd never heard of this form before. And I though Haiku was a challenge! Well done!
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Well done with this one my friend!
Always a pleasure to read your work here.
Take care and good luck!
Jeremy0826
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