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The Girl I Hate..Is Me..

every morning i get up
every day it's just the same

i turn in fear to my mirror
looking at someone to blame

the eyes that stare back
are lost in confusion and guilt

the soul inside screams out
through all the pain she's built

she wants to know why
but knows what could come

her whole body trembles
while her soul grows numb

she's not the girl she used to be
if anything, she's brand new

i stare at her, wanting to help
but i don't know what to do

i turn away from my mirror
disgrace in my eyes

denying any similarity
from this girl that i dispise

i walk out of my room
the truth in my mind

i shake it away
she's not like my kind

if anything, we're the opposite
if anything, we're the same

you see, that girl was me
& that's the girl i blame...

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when i look in the mirror, the truth comes out...

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  • Lexie - gold member
    December 30, 2008
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    well done with this piece
    very well written