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Entering the Night

Standing in the darkness
Wind whipping at my face
Seeing things no one wants to see
Hearing his screams tears roll down my face
I want to run so badly
But my feat are anchored to the ground
My shaking frame slides to the ground
I can't move i can't breath
Something inside of me
Is tearing me apart
The cold is nipping at my face
But I can't feel a thing
My body is already numb
All i feel is the pain inside
I want it all to go away
They come towards my cowering self
On the ground defencless
I don't run though
I don't want to run
Then they turn and leave me where i am
Dissapearing into the woods
I want to scream for them to come back
To kill me too
Then with a jolt i relize
I'm standing in the darkness
No one is there
Just the darkness
Just the night
The pain still searing in my chest
Tears rolling down my cheeks
I take myself away
And enter the night

Author notes

its about a dream i had. i just wanted to write it down. it scared me a little bit

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  • Betting Roses
    January 26, 2009
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    ahhhhhhhhhhh.


  • Betting Roses
    January 11, 2009

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    wow ray this is good. its rly hard to read cuza the red and blue. I want to know the dream pwease.
    this reminds me of the one I had about danny.

    tonights is not going to be good. I can tell already. I let you know how bad it is in the AM.


  • ASmileForYou
    January 6, 2009

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    If I had that dream i'd be scared too. This was really good and I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for entering it!