Safe Cave

cobweb

b l o c k s

entrance

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Brevette

The Brevette Contest 3 by Billbard. 1000 points, ended December 28, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Rambunctious
December 26, 2008

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I see the Spiders web, more than a cobweb...Great!
The silk of the spider's web is excedingly strong. Your write is so thought-provoking... Great write and you get more amazing with each write!
KUDOS!!!

SensualD.
- amysticwriter
  December 26, 2008
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  Happy you liked my brevette, my spider web is dusty...lol...sould I change the wording...I value your critique...
- - Rambunctious
    December 26, 2008
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    You must not change the wording!!! It is great as it is and very clever. It gives an impression of never had anyone, or anything, enter that cave for a long time. That's what make it so brilliant!
    
    Be well, dear Mystic Lady...
    
    SensualD...
rbruce
December 25, 2008

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Excellent work, title and words support each other so well. congratulations and good luck in the contest. Should be a winner.
- amysticwriter
  December 25, 2008
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  Thanks for your support...
Jeremy0826
December 24, 2008
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Interesting write here!
I hope that you do well with it.
Good luck to you!

Jeremy0826
- amysticwriter
  December 24, 2008
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  Thanks Jeremy...