Unnatural clouds...
fill a shrouded sky.
Children no doubt...
born with clouded eye.
Darkness has filled...
the world as we know it.
Animals are killed...
the truth? They refuse to show it.
Ozone depleted...
the Earth is thrown to hell.
People conceited...
in their own desire to accel.
The end they dread...
yet they charge with full force.
Darkness lies dead ahead...
that with deceiful cries, rules remorse.
Unnatural clouds...
fill a darkened sky.
The Earth doomed to fall...
yet still, they ask why.
Man made toxins...
destroy her protective shell.
Too late to save her?
Only time will tell... ... ...
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very deep and powerful. its goes really well with the picture
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thats really powerful.
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You compassionate heart ...
I feel with you the faint pulse of a world dying. But you know: God promised us a total resurrection.
And in the realm of the soul many wonders await us. In our stupidity and our greed we did destroy that which God has given in our care. Now let us repent, and wait to see the Fulfillment of his Promises and His Love ...
I am so glad you are here. You are a wondrous Light reflecting on his Truths.
Thank you, Raymond.
Love
Myra
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Thank you for your inspiring comments
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Excellent write, you have captured the essence of doom as I see it...
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BRAVO! this is exquisite and so true ...all I can do is clap clap clap and say onyah ...why wont we open our eyes and close down our profit margin greedy companies and bring back a pristine beautiful earth...
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Wow, very true. Amazing...It just goes to show how bad the earths condition is. This has very nice flow, and good rhyme. It should give lots to think about it.Thanks for writing this.
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you frighten with your words the condition of the earth...but it is true ...let it be an eye-opener..
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