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~ A Movement Towards Discord ~


~ Clutter
c r e a t e s
confusion ~

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  • suseann
    December 27, 2008

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    Ah..yes. But out of chaos comes order. Well thought out verse.


  • Swan song gold member
    December 27, 2008
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    I think this was stunning and very well done makes me want to clean my desk lol


  • WordsDoMatter
    December 25, 2008

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    wait... I'm trying to find it..

    and... confusion causes doubt, and doubt causes fear, and fear causes excuses, and excuses cause procrastination, and procrastination causes clutter. ah, the circle of life... er, maybe? Nice write, I enjoyed it. - Kevi


  • morningstar1948 gold member
    December 24, 2008

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    Three words said it all

    I have told my husband many time that he need to clean his shop up. And you said the words so perfert. thank you for the kindness note, I give praises to those that deserve it. and you are one that should be praises. You are the child of god.
    Never forget it
    Your freind forever
    Morningstar

  • Mailservhr
    December 24, 2008
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    nice

  • Mailservhr
    December 24, 2008
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    show me how to do this.

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