The night so silent,
So dark,
except for the beautifull stars,
that light it up the sky,
the peaceful noise of the silence,
the sweetness of the harmony of the calmness and the wind,
so admirable how the day is so difrent,
I can walk in the darkness and cry,
and nobody can see me,
I just love the night.
The Night I love this poem its just slow and sad but I like it....
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Very good
I understand you on the walking at night saying no one can see you cry I use to like to walk on rainy days for this very reason . Good work here
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luv it! well yea i kno u told it to me on the phone but i wanted to comment
well yea its great!!!! keep it up gal!
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I think this poem was a spectacular beginning. Maybe a little changing her and there, but I like it.
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haha lol I like the day better too
ummmm but I didnt reallt get any ideas to make a poem about day so I just got ideas of the night lol but thanks for commenting haha -
i liked the day better but after reading this i think youre right!
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