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Mealy Apple Town

New York,
upper east side.
Sonnets elicited from tickled keys,
piano notes rising into cigarette smoke.
Another faceless fame chaser ascends the stage.
Sinatra from his lips, martini glass in hand.

Chocolate flesh caresses my breast,
saccharine lies said between,
flimsy protection for my weary heart.

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  • Angelflower
    January 2

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    Softly read, with vivid imagery..
    beautiful write, with heartfelt emotion.
    Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2

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    Another person whom has improved their imagery in their poems since they first started. This is such a popular way of being and it shows that you have grown.