'through black and blue,
through thick and thin,
it takes much more to break the skin.
looks like we've finally made it,
this time we finally made it'
the words floated off your lips,
I'm sure
just as easy as the smoke from the cigarettes
.exhale
cough.
.cough
it didn't take more
it broke, and I bled
let me feel again
make my heart fly
show me that you need it
show me that I haven't
swallowed my heart forever
Author notes
I haven't written in a while.
This is just a pile of shit.
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I love the image of the difference between bruising the skin and breaking it. And I agree-it is not a pile of shit. Far from it. This is an excellent piece. Thank you for sharing!
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This is most certainly not a pile of shit. It's a good write, that can summarize how many people feel after a relationship ends, or any other scenario in which something can be lost. This is a good write, and it's formatted well.
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