yes
i survive this lonely world
but i'm cold
and without hope
my scars have risen again
like the monsters in a child's dream
why? why so much pain?
why me? why now? why ever?
the age old questions tumbling
never heard
for i keep them locked up
inside the oblivion of my mind
teardrops raindrops
forever falling
the black lagoon of torment spreads
my heart a burning wasteland
i cannot let you in
this pain i will not share
i refuse to pass this virus unto you
one bleeding soul
is quite enough for the world at hand
Author notes
11-03-08
Please tell me your honest opinion
Comments
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now i feel lonely.
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It's beautiful.. so much emotion in it. You really made me feel it. Made me understand, yet left me confused. All in a good way, though
You tell just enough of the story to not reveal it, but to leave the reader wondering, and being able to interpret.
Really cool
~MJ
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Its really good babe. Embueing emotion into your poetry for me is one of the greatest challenges. But you did a great job of it here.
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