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Honestly

Hardships "I" have ENDUREd
Searching souls i have cured
A finger print on life, it was mine
Feeling our bodies become entwined

Erotic TO a whimper, i have CONTROLled
Alway's assertive, i remained bold
your body over again, i have teased
While your mind, by my hand was pleased

Now i release YOUR MEMORY to the wild
To start your journey as a new child
Hold on firm to the beliefs you know
In all walks of life, let your training show

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Only drips from a leaky brain pan.....

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  • Desire gold member
    December 25, 2008

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    Oh My Word!!

    Holy Moly my Friend and Welcome Back!! What a piece You have penned
    Very Creative
    I'm Happy to see Your quill dancing
    Yay!! Hope You had the BEST Holiday and a Blessed New Year too
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


    • HammeR
      December 25, 2008
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      Ah but you are too kind for a straggler that visits rarely. I appreciate your opinion on this write. Occasionally I have some writes come to mind and pen them but not as often as they used to. Have a merry Christmas.

      Thank you once again,

      HammeR


  • queen Moderators member
    December 25, 2008
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    Very nicely done

    • HammeR
      December 25, 2008
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      Thank you kindly mam. I appreciate you reading this write and commenting on it. Hope your Christmas was great.