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A Christmas To Forget

I sit here on Christmas Eve
tears falling from my eyes
like the rain from heaven
falling all around me.

I can literally feel my
heart breaking once again.
I try to put on a smile
if only when my son is around
so he won't know my pain.

Loosing your twin flame
on Christmas Eve, how
ironic can that be?
I guess that's what I deserve
I would expect nothing less.

I don't even have the words
to finish this piece
I feel so damn broken
and so alone there are no
words to describe this...

CHRISTMAS TO FORGET

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  • insideinsanity
    December 28, 2008

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    I don't know what happened...but I'm so sorry for you. Not on Christmas even, but in general.

    Unpleasant is bad, and I'm sorry.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 26, 2008
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    so sorry...

    for you pain..i pray things get better for you..


    • sensualbutterfly
      December 27, 2008
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      Thank you my friend. Was just feeling a little blue this christmas, feeling better now though.


  • XneverXgoodXenoughX
    December 26, 2008
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    Amazing...

    this was a great way to describe the pain that you felt. dont stop writing.

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