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Hold it in

Black and white
Hold it in
Man up
Prepare for the fight
Take a stance
Breath it out
Hold that pose
Here's your chance
Scream it loud
Take it all
Break the silence
Stand  proud

Cause this is life
Where the strong
Only need to be weak

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  • meggie94x
    December 24, 2008
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    very good. all the guys we know need to man up


  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    December 24, 2008
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    LOVELOVE

    i think its sposed to be breathe*
    but im not sure.

    i love this. XD