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The Goddess

The goddess breathing out her dreams
With every entacy of light passed from her lips
A dream added to her heart
As for me
I'm just melting in this crude shell before her
Melting withing her beaty I am not worthy to see
Everything is vibrating at a lower pitch
The pain of those before me that have seen her
The goddess of our dreams
The dreams of light floating away now
She grows near
I then slip away into this world
Slipped away for no one to see
No one to notice me
Walk on past
The one who's seen the goddess
I'm so special in my own mind
No one notices
No one cares
But I know I was there

Author notes

It's an on demand poem, so it's not that good XD

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  • Nardiarrrg
    December 25, 2008
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    It's not to bad...
    But still... thanks for entering and good luck =]]