The goddess of fate,
conserves the right
alone
of creating worlds
unlike our own.
she dreams
of a world
and all it seems
to horde.
She closes her eyes
blows
says her goodbyes
and there i goes.
Magical wonder,
glorious things,
are hidden under
all that sings.
that will not be torn asunder,
by our doings.
Do not touch her world
lest they pop,
and all that will be heard
is them begging for it to stop.
and remember
now and forever
The goddess of fate,
conserves the right
alone
of creating worlds
unlike our own.
Author notes
I'm talking about parallel universe, but I don't know if you can tell. i'm don't usually do rhyming poems, but I thought I'd try it, lol.
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Comments
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Although this could refer to a parallel universe, it could also speak of something as simplistic as fate itself. It reminds me of certain morals within greek mythology. Ediapus, I'm not sure how it's spelled, but the moral is that one cannot escape their fate even if they try to. By trying to escape one's fate, they immediately make it happen as it was intended.
I do follow where you're coming from though. That's just what I got out of it. Good poem.
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This one is amazing... it has a good flow when its being read..
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