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I just... can't...

'It was her birthday...'
I inwardly reprimanded myself again,
'her freaking birthday!'.
I shake my head,
silent as always,
and clutch my perfect hands together,
wishing I could crush my own
skull
with them.
how could I have let that
happen?
What if she had been hurt?
I wracked my quick mind
answers,
answers,
what could I do?
How could I protect her?
And it was there,
black in front of me,
the answer,
my miserable future,
what I would have to do.
"Bella, we need to talk."

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frozenblackpetals
Edward..... or Alice.......

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Comments

  • Great poem, you let the reader wonder.


  • Simply.Nora.
    December 26, 2008

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    whoa. i really love all this twilight poetry. i wish Stephenie Meyer knew about this twilight-mania on AP. anyway, this was really good. i love the way you ended it, tied perfectly in new moon. gosh. now i'm nervous about my chance in this contest.


  • SimplyNoodle
    December 24, 2008
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    verry interesting wonderfuly written and thank you for following the rules