Her cinder block, grey stoned eyes hide the thoughts that swallow her whole
Still stuck inside a tension of what happened long ago
He held her close, taking her under further every minute
But does he know, she still lives in that moment
Such a violation meant she would be forever breakable
In someone else's hands
Her rib cage still caves in
When he comes around again
Love is her fear
A contest entry
- with the abstract in mind.. by The-Phoenix.
900 points, ended January 10, 25 entries
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Comments
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WOW is all i can say! i can relate to this so well 'taking her under further every minute
But does he know, she still lives in that moment' these words are so true and i can understand how you feel so wel. You are so incredibly talented i dont know what to say. You express exactly how i feel too in your words, I am so sorry for your hurt, for your pain and for your fear.
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