Remembering the moment you left,
even the scent of the fresh fallen rain.
The poisoned words you echoed
still reverberate throughout my mind.
With each word replayed,
my wounds are reopened and vulnerable.
Without your beautiful stone cold skin
against the warmth of my body,
I feel lost and as though part of me is missing.
The void within my heart is gaping
and growing with every passing moment.
Why did you leave me?
Your voice haunts my thoughts;
you've become my conscience.
Warning me of dangerous actions,
I swear you're somehow watching me.
This pain, I cannot bear any longer,
I need to feel you upon my skin once more.
If you had any idea how I felt about you,
it would have been impossible for you to leave me.
Come back and fill this gaping hole in my heart.
Author notes
TwilightDazzles
Hmm, It's hard to choose a favorite. My favorite female is Alice <3
My favorite male is Edward...drool.
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A contest entry
- O.T.S. ( Obsesive Twilight Syndrom ) by SimplyNoodle.
550 points, ended December 31, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great write! I love it. I feel like I'm reliving New Moon. I love "The poisoned words you echoed/still reverberate throughout my mind."
Great job! Keep writing.
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gosh that part of new moon was so sad. this poem is really good. its like reliving new moon.
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nicley writtten and well said, is your ap name twlightdazzlees? if nto please add it to yourauthor notes, have a good day.
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*TwilightDazzles Yes that is my name
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