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Reflection

Thoughts that seem to wander

throughout

the span of time.

 

Leave me in seclusion

tearing apart

my mind.

 

Flutters of immersion

touching off

the

indicator of

isolation

filling me with

loss.

 

Stepping into tomorrow

falling into

 

the past!!!!!!!!

 

Resulting in

total repudiation

of an

amazing life.

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  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    December 26, 2008

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    Well you have certainly taken your mind and given us an abstract vision from within. I love the way you have created an air of curiosity tracing the lines to the end,,, The separation from falling into tomorrow, just to find the past was a great move, and threw me back into thought of what lay before. Just amazing, and should sit well in the contest, well done.