For all the times I've died
Tonight I'm taking flight
Oh, that ocean in the sky
residing in my mind
Pineal dreams as real as light
Orchestrated by my swaying kite
Blinding sight radiating
from the scribbles I've been shading
A contest entry
- Should you be on my favorites? by unraveled.
700 points, ended March 15, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I wish to feel alive by awannabepoet.
600 points, ended April 22, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What does it mean to you?
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
It truly is a wonder this little poem for it does speak to me of who I like to think I am.
For having felt a thousand emotional deaths yet still one rises into the skies and brings out the scribe that he may shed some of that which is hiding inside his mind.
I like it, I like it so!
-
-
thank you my friend
-
-
hrm, i just added you to my favorites- you definitely already deserved to be there. i like this one. the rhyme works wonders.
-cassidy
-
-
thank you that made me feel good.
-
-
i had to leave a comment, it deserves one.
loved it. light kite, simple rhymes that connect the two lines so well. it is one of the most beautiful lines i have read, and yet so simple.
love it.
-
-
thank you that means a lot! yeah i like this one.. i might add more if inspiration strikes.
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
