amongst the crumbling edifices we thrive
alleyway jackals with a message in a bullet:
to keep spreading the empire worldwide from a bloody pulpit
our religion is all out war
Author notes
Just read Killing Hope by William Blum.
What does it mean to you?
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hard-edged, but not so much as to cut me. I may have to check out that Blum book. [of course, I'm already about 200 books behind on my reading list... too much working and reading poems...LOL]
A good compression of your thoughts into one tight poem. I am impressed.
Write On!
jIM
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nice
short and sweet
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Lots of imagery and metaphor here. Nice write. I'm heading out now, but I look forward to reading more of your writes a different time.
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why thank you! enjoy whatever you do
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i will have to read that.
and i loved it. great metaphors.
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yo man
yo that chick is soo into you man and not a bad looker too i'd hit that but not vulgarly i'd be hittin it all romantical but thats just the first hour the next would be a hardcore Olympic event she wouldn't walk right for a week and if she reads this i hope see understands that im not a womanizer just sayin what i think and o ya i liked the poem short blunt and to the point ha blunt -
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ok definitely no need to leave this as a comment to a poem.
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ok a womanizer wouldn't use words like hittin it, or call it a olympic event.
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