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Eve

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Eve is oh so sad
and oh so quite

Eve is sad and
oh so quite

Thought of Eve
and man is tired

The long sleep
and sleepy ribs

Eve is thin on
streaks of pigs

The fat adams
apple crunchy

Eve is oh so glad
that adams ate

Eve is glad and
oh so full of

Thought of Adam
cleans his plate

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Adam and eve
ate one plate

Adam and eve
shared the loo

Eve an Adam
were one screw

Eve is gone
Adam is gone

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All is not lost
sprouts cooked

Chickens plucked
now in an oven

One plate, knife,
fork, spoon, cracker.

This lonely eve
I began death

Decomposing
old green skin

Chicken and sprouts
face the world

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In the mirror
an enemy eye

Feeling a lonely Christmas

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  • xxkayleexx
    April 10

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    thanks for the comment much appreaciated i really like this poem i like how all the verses are short yet poewfull and captivating x


  • Heroesrox
    March 23

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    This is really good. It makes me think, you know? It's a thinker!!! (For sure!) Keep up the great work! Thanks for sharing. Best wishes to you...

  • ...........wow............. :| .... that is like ... awesome... and left ,e speechless.. and tongue tied lol