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Ornamental Snow

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tree branches

tailored in white

adorns winter

 

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  • Draig aine gold member
    April 4
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    perfect as written


  • Malabu
    January 26

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    simpe... but effctive
    the picture is not necessary
    i like this
    tree branches
    tailored in white

    winter adorned came to my mind
    thank you for your entry


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 2

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    there is a soft yet a strong view of the creative image you crafted...so beautiful and tender impact you made..well done...


  • Stevie.me
    January 2

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    Delicious soul candy

    I love it, absolutely great. I love short poems that are dense with information so this was soul candy to me, yummy delicious.

  • jodygirl
    December 25, 2008

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    I just love a good Haiku, and this one is great. I am still trying to put one together the way it is supposed to be. Yours is the best. Good luck in the contest.


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 25, 2008

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    Length is perfect here. Trees wrapped in coats of snow are certainly a beautiful sight to see. Best of luck to you.


  • daviscth silver member
    December 24, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful piece. I love the imagery and the picture is so pretty. Best wishes in the contest.

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