No one understands how I feel when I reach out for your cold hand,
No one can comprehend how I deal with my pain but you my friend you do.
No one else knows me like you do, no one else heals me with what they do,
But you my dear Edward you can save me from the world and even better myself.
Ever time you kiss me its like my lungs have been carried away,
Everytime you hold me its like my verry last day.
No matter how hard I have to try Ive made up my mind,
Edward I will never be able to leave you behind!
Author notes
OPTION 2: i really enjoyed this option last time so i think i'll do it again: write me something Twilight series inspired. i will ask however that if u choose this option and have already won a trophy from ME on the Twilight option in my last contest that you enter a different poem.
A contest entry
- 5 Options for the Creative Poet (25) by bananasfoster42.
765 points, ended January 3, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - within your arms, I feel by Remnant.
430 points, ended February 18, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy Valentine's Day!! by Cynthia Gaines.
2100 points, ended February 20, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Twilight! ONLY TWILIGHT...NONE OF THE OTHER BOOKS PLEASE. I HAVEN'T READ THEM YET. by Beautiful-N-Broken.
460 points, ended March 27, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i really really dont like this poem is horribal, what do you think?
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Oh wow! Wonderful write! Took my breathe away! Thanks so much for entering and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you.
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An Uniquely Interesting Valentine's Day Greeting...
Thank you for sharing your muse's talents with us! I'm not a "Twilight" fan, and I really have no idea who Edward is, but I'm wishing you all the best in the contest!! Take care. 
Peace, xx Cyn xx 
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Lol My thank you tis a little late, But edward is the main vampire in the book twlight and Bella(human) falls in love with him.
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Good, positive write
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great write!! thanks for the entry =)
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awesome poem. the word seem as if they came straight from Bella's mouth.
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Great
I found this poem very well written and yes in my mind I feel that the Edward you speak of could be oneself for we must never leave ourselves behind
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thank you
you should read the book
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