a liquid chill veil
winged the trap bird in the snow
painted in the white
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Malabu.
800 points, ended February 2, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I would suggest eliminating the picture...
Haihu should take someone in place of mind
Through a picture of words such as;
l
snow bird painted white
hinged to a liquid chilled veil
mirror of winter
thank you for your entry
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my ku. I will revise my ku. Saddie23
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Simply beautiful with some lovely imagery!
Thanks a lot for sharing it here and good luck!
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment. Saddie23
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