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Chill Veil

a liquid chill veil
winged the trap bird in the snow
painted in the whiteA Tarmagan Is A Snowbird. 

A contest entry

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  • Malabu
    January 26

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    I would suggest eliminating the picture...
    Haihu should take someone in place of mind
    Through a picture of words such as;
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    snow bird painted white
    hinged to a liquid chilled veil
    mirror of winter

    thank you for your entry

    • saddie23
      January 26
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my ku. I will revise my ku. Saddie23


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 25, 2008

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    Simply beautiful with some lovely imagery!
    Thanks a lot for sharing it here and good luck!




    Jeremy0826

    • saddie23
      December 25, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment. Saddie23