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Winter Haiku (seasonal)

rain sleet snow~limbs fall

red sleigh trails santas reindeer

chimneys clog with soot

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haiku for christmas thoughts

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  • Malabu
    January 23
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    rain sleet snow~limbs fall
    red sleigh trails santas reindeer
    chimneys clog with soot

    i find this entertaining

    shoud read;
    rain sleet snow- limbs fall
    red sleigh trails santa’s* reindeer
    chimneys clogged with soot

    last line;
    chimneys clogged with loot
    thank you for your entry


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 12
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    very well done


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 24, 2008

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    Wonderful thoughts that reflect the Holiday season. I enjoyed the imagery created in these few lines. Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 24, 2008

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    excellent~

    I love doing haiku's but always ask someone to help me do the syllable count LOL..never seem to get it right...
    This is perfect....
    Best of luck in the contest sis
    A winner in my book
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~

  • Shy one
    December 24, 2008

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    great haiku, not sure of the syllable count, but pretty and cute poem to read, thank you sis for giving me asmile today good luck
    Bev


  • Swan song gold member
    December 24, 2008
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    excellent dang chimneys !!!!!

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