Far back before mankind
They were always there
And They already knew
Let us make man in our image…
From earth he was formed
Then she from him
Blessed to multiply their Likeness
You will be like God, knowing good and evil …
But he was there too
The sly and cunning one
But he did not know
What is conceived in her is from the Holy Spirit …
Then a seed formed Life
Through Virgin birth so pure
A blessing for all humankind
Let's go to Bethlehem and see this thing that has happened …
The angelic, poor, and wise
Were there with own purpose
Their homage a blessing to them
Unless I wash you, you have no part with me …
Lord, wash me and cleanse me
Let me humble my life, as You did
Rejuvenating Your blessing within me
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very well done
Beautiful consistant pattern throughout the poem. Your message was conveyed with passion.
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Thank you
Drifting Cloud. I appreciate your comments. Frans
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Beautiful ...
in recollecting timeless Truths. Thank you Frans!
May you and your family have a joyous yet peaceful Celebration.
Baie dankie, Frans, vir die voorbeeld wat jy stel.
Edengroete
Myra
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Myra
Not spoken to you for a long time. Hope all is well. Thanks for your kinds comments on my poem. Frans
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One could picture you, Frans,
as the leader of the flock,
reading the lines, then
contributing your
personal asides
in an inspired
poetic style.
Kudos for the inspiration.
M-C
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I always
enjoy your comments. Your comments to 'Rejuvenation' is much appreciated. Frans
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Yes!
How wonderful Frans, just what I needed to be reminded of right now!!!! 
Each stanza is almost a Senryu [making a Chain], well, I guess it depends on how you define that with all the morphing going on nowadays! 
You put this together quite well. Thank you for sharing this!
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Kathleen
thanks for commenting on 'Rejuvenation'. Blessings. Frans
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