Breathe into me your revelations
the secret knowledge you posses
inside in your locked mind.
Open your closed mind
and free yourself as you learn
to crawl around your thoughts.
where you play hide-n- seek to find yourself
and once your found you realize your lost
again.
Into the ocean I cast my worries
feeling light I begin to fly you came along
and offered me your love
You grounded me.
Author notes
I used three of your title in this poem they are:
Breathe into me, learn to crawl,into the ocean.
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Comments
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great idea with combining the titles prompts!! thanks for this entry =)
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To deeply feel the love from another is to feel grounded within its arms and to know the eccense of the mind is to find the peace only lovers can...i really like this, thanks for sharing it with me
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verry nice write
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