I am free
as free as the wind
I wish to be
so I can soar high
In the air
like a bird
I want this to be me
So my spirit can not be broken
I will find away
even if I have to fly high in to the air
as high as an eagle in flight
First I have to chose my path
this is not easy
and my freedom
can fade
But what ever happens
I aim to be as
free as I can be
Don't listen to the phrase
' I am only human'
That is am excuse that man
made to escape freedom
No matter what happens to me
No mater who I am
No matter what path I choose
No matter what happens in the future
No matter what age I am
my freedom
my spirit will
never leave my
sight
This is my prayer to the world
Freedom is in the blood
That is me
Author notes
this is inspired on my favourite movie finding never land .
where you never give up no matter what age you are
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Comments
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Wonderful aspirations in this poem, and well deserving of the HM's
be well,
Trent
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Very hopeful, very true! You sound like you have such a strong character. Keep this attitude... it's contagious!
My favourite lines:
Don't listen to the phrase
' I am only human'
That is an excuse that man
made to escape freedom
Excellent.
Thank you for your entry.
David.
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thanks for entering
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good write...keep up the work and thank you for entering my contest
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Lovely. I didn't see that movie, but I like the depth of this. I especially like,
'So my spirit can not be broken'
thank you for your entry
best wishes
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Nice one
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suggestion:
Please put author's name and Amaranthine Lover in the author's notes so that I know who you are and that you read my rules, thank you. I see anything not pertaining to my guidelines, I WILL DQ.
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Yes, I agree with you- no matter who you are, no matter what age you're at, you should always go after your dream- which in this case, is freedom.
Lovely.
I used to think that freedom was the best thing in the world, but not so much anymore... I guess, I saw some of the things that come with too much freedom... and it wasn't too pleasing.
Anyhow, great write .
Thank you so much for your entry and all the best to you!
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