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Avalanche

Reluctant strands of symmetry
Touching hearts anew
Giving feelings of asymmetry
Glances of thoughts that I once knew
Silence reins as I try
Entry into a life I find taboo

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 27, 2008

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    A well-expressed poem about entering into some situation in life, with which you are not too familiar and comfortable.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas