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Seasons of Lace

Solemn winter spreads

wings of silvery silence

o’er the sullen moor.

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  • Malabu
    January 23

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    Solemn winter spreads
    wings of silvery silence
    o’er the sullen moor

    you have only one image here ...there should be two
    remember to small cap you words
    this may help
    http://www.haikuworld.org/begin/mdwelch.apr2003.html
    thank you for your entry


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 5
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    beautifally written. the title really caught my eye

    ♥ Kathraina


  • geckogirl silver member
    January 1
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    short, sweet & beautiful... nice pen... good luck


  • Ademon
    December 31, 2008

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    Such beauty, such depth in only 11 words...this is a beautiful poem...Very inspiring. Good luck in the contest!