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The Silence Is Too Loud

Music kept the attack away,
But not the Voice.
It tempts me,
I push it to the back of my mind.
Stubborn, it fights back.
Whispers sweetly in my mind.
I turn up the Music to drown it out.
It leaks through the Silence.
I can't escape. I can't escape.
You can't escape.
The Silence too loud,
The Music too quiet.
Flashbacks, its deadliest weapon.
Crash and Burn. Crash and Burn.
I see myself Crash and Burn.
On and On and On.
No end.
I lay there and endure.
Don't give in.
Three silent tears fall.
Fight. Fight. Fight.
It fades...
But just for this night.

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12.23.08-12.24.08

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  • shaedy3339
    January 11
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    *hugs* ill always be here for you =]


  • meggie94x
    December 24, 2008
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    So much more will come =[ but call me and we can get thru this together. lylas


  • Quietgirl17
    December 24, 2008

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    Wow this is so good. There is so much emotion and depth to this poem. This was written well. Great job.