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Pathology of my heart

Entombed I rest in perpetual death
Only to be risen by the warmth of your breath
My veins run dry, my heart beats hollow
Emotions decayed by remnants of sorrow

Hopeful I long for a fair conviction
To redeemn my faults against all prediction
Within ignorance I hide from my sad reality
The unwanted epilogue to a short lived love story

Immaculate you are beyond dispute
Enchanted I'm left by your every attribute
Wishful thinking tell me that you hear my plead
And accept my devotion to your every need

Apart we are kept because of my past
Restless I contemplate how long this will last
Screams from afar that match this voice of mine
Screams that provoke and say I'm out of time

Hard as I try and fight the thought
Your love is for sale but cannot be bought
With no approach I remain maimed by confusion
My lonely young mind driven by delusion

Amidst my regret I follow this road
Perhaps it leads to a peaceful threshold
Tears on my lips and my eyes gloom red
I hope you won't forget what I said

I love you.

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  • Kyrie
    January 2

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    wow

    this piece left me speechless. the feeling is pouring out past the words. GREAT WRITE!!!!!
    fav lines;
    "Amidst my regret I follow this road
    Perhaps it leads to a peaceful threshold
    Tears on my lips and my eyes gloom red
    I hope you won't forget what I said

    I love you."


  • Cryssi-Bear
    December 25, 2008

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    Wow.
    Truly amazing.
    I really am sorry that you were unable to enter my contest. It would've held up very nicely.
    "Apart we are kept because of my past
    Restless I contemplate how long this will last"...
    reminds me of my relationship now.
    Great write, really.
    I'm glad you shared. =]