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No Erotica Please------!!!

Adam  and eve
our pious ancestors
stole the show
covering their bodies
with leaves as dress

Our silver screen deities
break our hearts
with nudity, as apt innovation
to imitate our ancestors in acts and deeds
Save the land with serenity as hope
Deriding the dreams, from all obscure emotions

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  • The-Phoenix
    December 24, 2008
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    This made me smile. The irony is amusing and not what I expected. I gotta say that I love it though.
    You've made a very good point in the piece.

    "Our silver screen deities
    break our hearts
    with nudity"
    Favorite part.

    Great write.
    Thank you.

    ~Phoenix