five below zero
an icy stare cast downward
from a wind froze hawk.
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A contest entry
- HAIKU by Malabu.
800 points, ended February 2, 44 entries
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five below zero
an icy stare cast downward
hawk on daily prowl
this comes to me;
thank you for your entry -
a snapshot of winter flight
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Excellent use of imagery here. An icy climate to accomodate an icy stare. Best of luck to you.
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Wow, this is a great haiku with some
wonderful imagery. Good luck to you here!
Jeremy0826 -
Now I like this, nature of birds in flight, nice piece of haiku here, good luck in his contest
Voe
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FFFFrrreeezzziiinnnggg. Better the Hawk than me...nice imagery and words.
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Nice one.
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This is really an awesome Haiku. Perfect image in perfect seventeen syllables. I feel sorry for the Hawk.
Love,
Amera♥
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