diamond crystals
under the glow of streetlamps
i walk in the stars
Author notes
haiku
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Malabu.
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Comments
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hmm...doesn't follow the haiku structure but i accepted your explanation, so it stays. very good haiku (per se), well written indeed. thanks for entering and good luck
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lovely
I like this one.. no stars to walk in in our snowy village though, as we have no streeet lamps...
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Thank you, when I have the money I will send you a few, perhaps then you could or maybe care for what I have written.
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this one is lovely, walking in nature can bring all things to a treat to see, thank you for this entry, good luck
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Thank you very much, my best wishes.
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Wow! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!
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spellbinding!
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Lovely!
This is so delicate & dreamy. Are you a songwriter? I can see how you made it into the finals! I really like line 3! Ah...love the whole ku! All the best in the Contest!
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this is an excellent ku
in my humble opinion
thank you for your entry
note; might consider s* to streetlamp
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This haiku definitely has an aw-ha ending. Lovely imagery and full of visuals. Well done.
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Thank you kindly, my best wishes.
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yea, this rocks.
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Definitely digging this 'ku. A beautiful description of snow in the streetlamp light. Best of luck to you.
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Thank you very much, my best wishes. Merry Christmas
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oh i like this, so serene from the way of a life on the go, nice one, good luck in his contest
VOE
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