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frozen landscape winks
in frosted topping epoch;
transient romance







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  • Malabu
    January 23

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    frozen landsape winks
    in frosted topping epoch;
    transient romance

    landscape*

    last line;
    our short-lived romance
    thank you for your entry


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    December 26, 2008

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    Lovely imagery with that pleasing twist ending, very nicely done my friend! Write On!

    Brother Dennis


  • WolfHeart
    December 24, 2008

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    You never cease to amaze me. This is smart, concise and just as powerful as a sledgehammer. Beautiful imagery and soft reflections. Excellent work.