innocent mind
with empty gaze,
looks up to the skies
clouds reflecting in eyes.
boy in amazement,
watching unfolding universe,
ambition freed,
for next moment.
life yet to meander
into turbulence,
placid mind captures
astral happenings,
without leaving a streak.
like sky
emptying clouds;
his mind withhold nothing
leaving empty space
for new to flow.
thoughts shut our eyes.
open skies,
with flying birds
a lone tree
revel in empty mind of a child.
Author notes
A contest entry for:
with the abstract in mind..
A contest entry
- with the abstract in mind.. by The-Phoenix.
900 points, ended January 10, 25 entries
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Comments
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Wow lol What are you playing at it's shorter than one could imagine. Fun so the best part of poem I liked was:
"Little Master
Empty Mind"
Just 4 words wow. Well but the advantage is that it holds hundreds of meanings in these little words. I took the meaning that youth of today is just mad lol, fake and all. but really that was fun if it was all!!
Anyways
~~~~Good Luck~~~~
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