Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

life

water freeze
ceasing flow upon chill
blood defies

Author notes

haiku

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Malabu
    January 23

    Edit | Reply
    river’s froze
    beneath the chill
    cold blood

    this came to my mind
    reading your ku
    thank you for your entry


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 24, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Life is meant to defy the elements. A thoughtful piece you have here. Thanks for sharing and best of luck.