Missing Mommy
Since The Drug Life
She Chose
Took Her Life
Author notes
The picture with this write I do not claim as my own. Picture by Paul Shoul
A contest entry
- OPTIONS (PW ALLOWED) by Rhythm Child.
400 points, ended February 8, 2009, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - About Drugs by just4fun20.
400 points, ended March 5, 2009, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Powerful
This, indeed, has an impact. With writing, sometimes it is not all about the length of a piece, but whether that piece can tell a story: Yours does here.
It is short, but says a lot within the lines and words. Lot of personal emotion too in this, maybe? This gives it that added shock. Well done.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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a big impact for a small and simple poem
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wonderful, the pic and words can leave you speechless ( out of body experience )
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Short write but powerful and well written. Make people to think, ( at least I did! )
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WOW!!!
Very powerful words even more impactful than the icture! excellent write.. -
Nice job. Very well done.
Mike
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Beautiful write sweetie, there are to many missing out there and the broken ones left behind.
Very Well Done
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Fantastic write volumes espressed in so few words is an amazing feat in itself. The picture sets it up and the words brings it home. Great poem and a great job. Happy Holiday and God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Oh My~
Wow this one pulls at the Heartstrings~ Powerful image also words with emotion that grab~
Oy!! Makes one think twice about choices made
This swells the eyes~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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there are so many mothers out here that don't realize how their choices affects their daughters lives.and broken in death or broken in spirit it's not fair.
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creepy goodness lol you must be on a dark suicide i am not sure though its good and different i love wacky stuff like this it calls for away of actually writing in a zone trying to fuck with ones mentallity you crack me up deeply honey next please i am so proud of you
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Excellent
Wow, another powerful write. Short, but so well done. Thank you so much for sharing.
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