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White Washed.

Lost in falling snow
And I barely remember
How to spare a tear.

A contest entry

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  • Stevie.me
    December 30, 2008

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    4.5 out of 5

    5 senses - 4.5 few senses but very powerful
    Metaphors - 3.5
    Feeling- 5
    Unity-4.5
    flow-5

    average rating -4.5


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 25, 2008

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    Wow, very interesting and sad.
    Lovely thought for this contest.
    Good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826